I woke up suddenly. It was a bad dream I thought. Except it was flying in front of me. It was a brown goldfish that flew slowly towards me. I ran outside, I grabbed a ladder and got on top of the roof. I was looking for the goldfish, it was nowhere to be seen. Then, I turned around and saw the brown goldish behind me. I panicked. So, I jumped into the pool and began to swim to the edge. I pulled myself out of the pool. I ran inside my house to find the fish with a knife.
First of all, I enjoyed your story. It was very interesting, especially the fact that the main character is running from a fish. Also, the story is unique, in its own way. Anyway, great job on your story.